学会欣赏他人
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on learning to appreciate others by commenting on the remark, “When you choose to see the good in others, you end up finding the good in yourself .” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
审题立意
1. 导语解读：要求考生从评论题目中的“当你选择去发现他人好的一面，你就会发现自己美好的一面”出发，就“学会欣赏他人”这一话题展开论述。
2. 文章立意：如果你欣赏他人，他人才会欣赏你。因此，欣赏他人很重要，我们要学会欣赏他人。
写作思路
1. 第一段简要评论题目中给定的话语的含义，然后提出论点：我们应该学会欣赏他人。
2. 第二段通过排比论证的方式阐述学会欣赏他人的重要性：既有利于自身，又有利于他人和社会。
3. 第三段点明应如何欣赏他人。
参考范文
“When you choose to see the good in others, you end up finding the good in yourself.” The remark tells us that if you appreciate others you’ll be appreciated by others. Therefore, we should learn to appreciate others. 1
It is a happy thing to appreciate others and be appreciated in return. Learning to appreciate others can make you become open-minded; learning to appreciate others can make you popular among people around you; learning to appreciate others can make yourself be appreciated by others; learning to appreciate others can make your heart full of love; learning to appreciate others can make you become benevolent; learning to appreciate others can help you become wise. Besides, learning to appreciate others is helpful to establish a healthy and harmonious interpersonal relationship and a bright and beautiful world. 2
How to appreciate others? App-reciating others means accepting, tolerating, praising, respecting and loving others. Take a boy of my classmates as an example. He often gets first place, but he is too arrogant and therefore he is not popular in our class. Although he’s very smart, he is not accepted by others because he can’t appreciate others. Let’s get along with each other with a kind and sincere heart and appreciate each other. 3
“当你选择去发现他人好的一面，你就会发现自己美好的一面。”这句话告诉我们如果你欣赏他人，他人也会欣赏你。因此，我们应该学着去欣赏他人。
欣赏他人而他人也欣赏你是一件快乐的事情。学会欣赏他人可以使你更加开明；学会欣赏他人可以使你在朋友中受到欢迎；学会欣赏他人可以使他人也欣赏你；学会欣赏他人可以使你充满爱心；学会欣赏他人可以使你变得仁慈；学会欣赏他人可以使你变得睿智。此外，学会欣赏他人有助于建立起健康和谐的人际关系和欢快美好的世界。
如何欣赏他人呢？欣赏他人意味着接受、容忍、赞美、尊重、爱他人。比如我们班的一个男生，他经常是班中的第一名，但是他太高傲自大，因此在班里不受欢迎。尽管他很聪明，但因为不会欣赏他人而不被他人接受。让我们用真诚的心与人相处并相互欣赏。
范文点评
1. 开篇简要评述给定话语的含义，引出文章的观点：学会欣赏他人。
2. 第二段采用排比论证的方式论述学会欣赏他人的好处，紧扣作文话题。
3. 第三段运用例证的方式论证如何欣赏他人，进一步升华观点。
要点用法
end up doing sth. 以做某事而告终
open-minded adj. 思想开明的
benevolent adj. 仁慈的；慈善的
harmonious adj. 和谐的；和睦的
get along with 与……相处
句法点评
1. It is a happy thing to appreciate others and be appreciated in return.
It代替真正的主语，即动词不定式to appreciate others and be appreciated，充当形式主语。in return意为“反过来，反而”。
2. Take a boy of my classmates as an example.
take...as an example是“举例”的表达方式，又可以说成take...for example或者直接表示为take sth./sb.意为“以某人/某事为例”。
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