关于生活中的选择
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on life choices by referring to the remark “Life is all about choices. How many people are trapped in their everyday habits: part numb, part frightened, part indifferent? To have a better life we must keep choosing how we’re living .” You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make better choices in life . You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
审题立意
1. 导语解读：要求考生就题目中给定的话语“生活处处是选择。很多人陷入日常的生活习惯中：些许麻木，些许害怕，些许漠然。为了拥有更好的生活，我们必须不断选择如何生活。”进行简评，引出“生活的选择”这一话题并进行论述。
2. 文章立意：生活中充满选择，你可以选择整日碌碌无为，浑然度日，但生活的平淡注定你一事无成；你也可以选择奋发有为，积极上进，虽遭失败仍然一往无前最终取得巨大的成功。因此，我们要选择后者。
写作思路
1. 第一段简述题目中引语的含义，然后提出论点：如何生活完全取决于自己的选择。
2. 第二段阐述选择消极的生活方式只会让人一事无成，空留余恨。
3. 第三段论述如何正确选择生活。
参考范文
“Life is all about choices. How many people are trapped in their everyday habits: part numb, part frightened, part indifferent? To have a better life we must keep choosing how we’re living.” The remark means that it’s up to you to choose how you’re living. 1
It’s absolutely true that life is all about choices. 2 You can choose a mediocre life. But unfortunately, a mediocre life leaves you trapped in everyday habits: part numb, part frightened, part indifferent and you spend vainly the best days of your life achieving little. When you realize you should seize the day, it may come too late and leave regret. 3
As we all know, life is most precious to us and everyone lives only once. What will we do to make better choices in life? As far as I’m concerned, attitude is everything. Therefore, choose a positive attitude towards life, with which we don’t waste our youth in worthless pursuits. We will not regret if we don’t waste our life. 4
“生活处处是选择。很多人陷入日常的生活习惯中：些许麻木，些许害怕，些许漠然。为了拥有更好的生活，我们必须不断选择如何生活。”这番话是说如何生活取决于你自己的选择。
毋庸置疑，人生充满选择。你可以选择一种平庸的生活。但不幸的是，平庸生活使你受困于日常的生活习惯，变得些许麻木，些许害怕，些许漠然，你虚度最好的时光，收获寥寥。当你意识到你应把握今朝的时候，可能就悔之晚矣！
众所周知，人生对我们来说是最珍贵的，每个人都只活一次。那么我们怎样为人生做出更好的选择呢？就我而言，态度决定一切。因此，选择用积极的态度面对人生，不把青春浪费在无用的追求上。如果我们没有虚度光阴，我们就不会留下遗憾。
范文点评
1. 开篇简述给定话语的含义，结合话语含义给出文章论点：如何生活完全取决于自己的选择。
2. 自然过渡，第二段引出生活充满选择，紧扣作文话题。
3. 第二段主体部分用反面论证的方式阐述选择碌碌无为的生活只会给人留下悔恨。
4. 末段按照题目要求就如何选择更好的生活给出了自己的看法并进行论述。
要点用法
be trapped in 陷入困境
indifferent adj. 漠不关心的
be up to sb. 取决于某人
mediocre adj. 普通的；平凡的
spend vainly the best of one’s days 白白浪费大好时光
worthless pursuits 无用的追求
句法点评
1. It’s absolutely true that life is all about choices.
It’s absolutely true that...意为“毫无疑问……”，是引出观点的句式。
2. But unfortunately, a mediocre life leaves you trapped in everyday habits: part numb, part frightened, part indifferent and you spend vainly the best of your days achieving little.
这里运用了leave sb. done的结构，这种结构的使用使句子含义的表达更加紧凑。
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